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What do you think its about?

  • Mar. 20th, 2007 at 3:37 PM
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I was going to put this under my new journal ([info]ijikukeistva) but ugh, I forget one of the 'i's so I couldn't log in...
It's something that has always seemed oddly "obvious" to me; at least insofar as an obvious deduction. There you go.

Anyway...
The devils are coming. Red-eyed devils that run backwards, their heels glowing luminiously as day darkens into dusk. They sreech and thunder, spewing a vile fume from their cold long lips. They ripped through our home, killing thousands of our people, slaughtering us into pieces to be tossed aside in shavings of our flesh. Our dead were never replaced for the red-eyed devils carried with them on their back a long cloak of stone, dust and iron, tearing our kingdoms and homes into fragements of what our nation once was. But even as we speak, the red-devils grow stronger, multiplying from their unnatural births. Do you hear the hum and rumble of their foreign tongue? Already you may be enslaved and not even know it

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[info]kamelot_amhran wrote:
Apr. 3rd, 2007 03:51 pm (UTC)
Creepy. You write creepy, gore well (and romance! ;))
What is obvious about it? Details please? Thank you.
[info]ijikukeistva wrote:
Apr. 4th, 2007 03:19 pm (UTC)
Why thank you -_-
It's just the way trees would view cars; it came to me once. I mean cars are just like that right? And people have to cut up trees to make roads for cars, etc. And they have enslaved us so yeah... *shrug*
[info]kamelot_amhran wrote:
Apr. 4th, 2007 08:09 pm (UTC)
OMG, that's GOOD! That in a "happy-pleasent good way" but it a "amazingly original-creative good way". Reminds me of something I read of Ursula K. Guin (sp?). Wow, I had to go re-read it after this info. Wow. Poor trees...
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